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Awesome, Genechelle. I like “being there” in a story, but your intense narrative is more holistic—actual “being.” Isla’s excitement is heartedly illustrated: “Schrödinger’s cat / fireworks / holding your breath under water / talking about everything and nothing / a charge in the air / innocent yet intimate handholding.” I read the comments above and am now thinking about possible dragon and moon meanings too. Thanks for sharing such emotive work!

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"Without a whisper or warning, with that simple interaction, a tide was about to set off." except the interaction is me coming across this post and the tide is my curiosity and excitement for the following acts because now i'm personally invested and can't physically wait to keep reading!!!!!!!!!!!!

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